The Ocean's Daughter(might not be the title)
By: Ellowyn Nova
Chapter 8:
Ronan knelt before a girl with jet black hair that cascaded over her shoulders. The girl’s piercing ice blue eyes held a hint of malice and cunningness. She had flawless porcelain skin that entranced any boys who came upon her. Her lips, a subtle shade of crimson, curved into an alluring smile that set hearts racing, yet concealed her true intentions.
The girl’s eyes flashed with fury as she gazed upon her trembling servant."Ronan," the girl hissed, her voice icy. "You let them escape,”
Ronan's heart sank as she stared at the ground, afraid to meet her mistress’s gaze. Her mind raced, desperately searching for an excuse, but there was none. She had failed her, and she knew the consequences would be severe. "I-I'm sorry, Mistress," Ronan stammered, her voice barely audible. “A — Adira came. I had…
Okay what?! There’s another sister?! How many is siblings does Adira have? Okay somebody has to have a long discussion about the whole Riverblaze family relationship, because something fell through a long time ago with the whole Ashlynn under an abusive father and Ronan her cousin being a bad guy and then a traitorous brother and an evil sister. Also, that was a turn of events. Ronan giving allegiance to Adira? I still don’t trust her. I wonder why she even betrayed her own cousin? In fact I want to know what happened to all of these characters and what is behind all of the motives?