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So, since we're doing polls, I shall contribute (but this is a decision I actually have to make so votes are helpful.)


My WIP has turned into a trilogy. The first book will be narrated by Azra, and the second book will be narrated by an elf girl. The thing is, she is nissong a few things.


So first, description, so you can get the picture: Slim, 5'8" teen with shoulder-length straight steel-gray metallic hair, fair porcelain skin, pointy ears (!!!),slightly aloof/mildy fierce expression, and... she needs an eye color.


Abygayle Wynderas
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Maya Daisy
Mister or Miss So and So has won a writing competitions hosted by Leah Larkspur!1st Place Winner!

Hi guys! So, this is a silly little poll series I wanted to do. Basically, this fictional guy is an eight in looks and he likes to read. How would you rate him overall? I'm going to do a few more of these, and anyone who wants to make up their own is welcome! (don't worry, they can be ridiculous)

He's an eight and he reads

  • 10

  • 9

  • 8

  • 7


Abygayle Wynderas
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Amanda R

Well uh, him being into reading is sort of a priority for me. So definitely a 10!!

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Maya Daisy
Mister or Miss So and So has won a writing competitions hosted by Leah Larkspur!1st Place Winner!

Just so you guys know, this is very chaotic. It was really meant for my eyes only.


Timeline:

At age 7, there is a house fire at Calendula's parents manor, killing nearly everyone inside. This is not a fire of nefarious origin, it is truly an accident. Poor baby Calendula. She goes to live with Duke and Duchess Periwinkle. The adjustment period is rough, but soon she's adjusted to her fancy new life without her family.Ā 

At age 9 she meets Blossom, the daughter of a close friend of Duke Periwinkle. The two become fast friends.Ā 

Age 13- Duchess Periwinkle starts hyping up Calendula for her coming of age ball which happens at age 15. They start planning the party and the things they'll do afterward.

Abygayle Wynderas
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Oo! Maya, I don't think that was too chaotic. (Although, I've been trained to see past chaos and even turn a blind eye to it, so maybe I'm not the best to judge.) Poor Calendula! It's too bad she didn't get her gala. Can't wait to see where you take this story! (I hope you post chapters on here cause now I'm invested! šŸ« )

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Maya Daisy
Mister or Miss So and So has won a writing competitions hosted by Leah Larkspur!1st Place Winner!

Hello everyone! I'm posting a bit of the beginning of an old draft for my current work in process. I scrapped this beginning, but I'm still posting it! Lol


CHAPTER 1


Itā€™s the worst mess theyā€™ve ever made, but I canā€™t even bring myself to be mad at them. The diamond encrusted yeti statue was the most hideous and tacky thing Iā€™ve ever seen. Privately, everyone in the manor hates it, the servants because itā€™s a pain to clean, and the Duke and Duchess because frankly itā€™s hideous, but no oneā€™s never gotten rid of it because it was a gift from Duke Periwinkleā€™s Great-Aunt Lemon balm, and they knew she would be offended if it was moved from the Great Hall. Still, I try to act upset so that the twins donā€™t think itā€™s okay to go around smashing priceless objects in the house.

ā€œReally you two? Again?ā€ Iā€¦

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Abygayle Wynderas

First of allā€”applause applause applause! This is really interesting! I like how you use present tense instead of past tense. I've never written with it before, (at least I don't think so) but you did it really well! I love the character voiceā€”I really felt the exhaustion that Calendula was feeling. (I also may or may not be sleep deprived... :D) I know that you scrapped this, but this would be a great 'blooper' to include at the end of the book, assuming you publish it one day. Great job!

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